Superheroine in the Subway

Ms. Marvelous, the defender of Babble, is on her way to her work as her alter-ego, Jody Walker, a computer consultant. As usual, she uses the subway to commute. Unbeknownst to her, an enemy is watching her every move...

* Ms Marvelous is in my work attire, with my gray skirt coming down to my knees and my matching business jacket over a white button down shirt... i have my usual thick glasses on my nose, and i'm holding on to my gucci purse under my arm... i'm standing in a crowd, waiting for my train
* Fernandolickstit is in his so-called "molesting attire", which consists of a long overcoat that fully conceals any of his hidden gadgets of abuse and my face is concealed by large aviator sunglasses. I'm posted at my usual spot behind a pillar, survelling the crowd to determine my next target, when I spot you. *Oh, my, look who gets the honor today...* I think to myself as I hang back and wait for the train, prepping my materials.
<Fernandolickstit> (You still there?)
* Ms Marvelous the train finally arrives, and i bump into others as i try to find a spot to stand. i finally settle for a spot next to a pole... there's an old man sitting and dozing off right by my side, and i'm surrounded by many men who are taller than me, some reading news or listening to their ipod... i hold on to the bar, balancing myself as the train leaves the station. i turn my head and peek through my shoulder and sees a man in large sunglasses reading a book, but pays no attention to him.
* Fernandolickstit boards the train as soon as it shows up, making sure to stick close to you, my would-be victim, so that the chance doesn't slip through my skilled fingers. The book is a front, and is part of my MO, as I always carry it and pretend to be engrossed by its content, when in reality I'm just plotting my nefarious schemes. As you turn around for a look I slowly lean forward into the book, as if more enthralled by a new development, but in reality not wanting to spoil the surprise for you. I look you over, your creamy thighs hugging your demure business skirt quite tightly, letting people know that you're no ordinary businesswoman, and your full breasts sticking out quite teasingly, despite being well covered. I stand there for a bit more to admire your form and mentally prepare, and also to let you stew in your thoughts.
* Ms Marvelous looks out the window and thinks about the new silk panties and the matching bra i put on this morning... my gaze stays on the window, just killing time till my destination
* Fernandolickstit decides that enough is enough, and closes the gap between the two of us, pressing my engorged member, barely contained by my pants, between the crack of your taut ass, lewdly rubbing it against you as one of my hands creeps inside your jacket and captures one of your full breasts, kneading it lustfully. "Hello, current victim, or should I say Ms Marvelous? It's a pleasure to finally make your acquaintaince... as I'm sure you can tell."
* Ms Marvelous my eyes open wide in shock as i feel your hand under my jacket, groping my breast covered by my shirt... my body reacts fast to the touch, and my nipples harden and rubagainst my bra in a matter of seconds... i feel flushed as i feel your hard manhood between my cracks through my skirt...
* Ms Marvelous whispers to you "what... who are you? How do you know who I am?"
* Fernandolickstit whispers into your ear, "Well, let's just say I'm a fan of yours... Or is it future arch-enemy? It's so hard to know where to draw the line these days. But, I digress, my name, my dear, is Lando the Lascivious, and I've known about your true nature for quite some time now. I've just been waiting for the right moment to use that information to my benefit; that moment is now."
* Fernandolickstit takes your nipple between his skilled finger and begins to knead it profusely, applying just the right amount of pressure needed. "Oh, my, from what I can tell, you certainly don't seem bothered by my presence..." I tease.
* Ms Marvelous i bite my lips hard, trying to suppress a moan... my grip on the pole tightens as pleasure shoots through my body from your touch. I look back at you with such hate in my eyes... "I'm going to make you regret it if you don't stop this right now"
* Fernandolickstit is amused by your anger, knowing that I've got the upper hand and that any threats from you are simply empty. "Oh? You don't say? Well, I could stop now... but, then I might have to take out my frustrations on every young woman on this train, in addition to outing you as Ms Marvelous; I have photographic and videotaped evidence to back up my claims, too. In other words, my dear, all you can do is shut up and take it like a good little slut..." I reply as I sneak my large hand underneath your blouse and bra, taking hold of your bare breast in my hand, groping and kneading it endlessly as my other hand slowly sneaks down underneath your skirt, cupping your pussy from behind. "Oh, my, the news didn't mention anything about damp weather today..."
* Ms Marvelous blushes as your hands freely explore my private parts... i can already feel my love juice trickling down my athletic thighs as you continue to torment my breast, now completely unprotected from your hand... i cross my legs, trying to stop your hand from doing any more damage. I can feel my powerful body weakening as i'm aroused, but I put on a brave face, thinking there's no way you would know my weakness. "have fun all you want, but once this train stops, i'll pulverize your pathetic body"
* Fernandolickstit gives you a confident smirk, knowing quite well that once you're aroused your strenght is completely gone. "Pulverize, you say? Hmm, I don't know how you'll manage that, especially when you're running like Niagra Falls down here..." I taunt. "I know what Ms Marvelous's kryptonite is..." I whisper in your ear as I slip two fingers inside your new silk panties, now sopping wet, and begin tracing the outline of your swollen labia.
* Ms Marvelous soft moan escapes my lips as your fingers tease my sensitive neither lips. My fists clench tightly as i try to hold off these sensations coursing through my body. I feel my powers draining away along with my juice as it soaks your fingers and my new panties... "you... you know my weakness..."
* Fernandolickstit chuckles victoriously, "Indeed I do, Ms Marvelous. Once your arousal is in overdrive, you're just as weak as the next human woman. And I'm quite amused to find out just how little it took to make you succumb to my touch. You and I... we're going to have some fun on this ride." I reply, smiling smugly at you as my fingers locate your sensitive clit, putting the squeeze on it, so to speak, as my massive member continues to grind on you, this time a lot more vigorously.
* Ms Marvelous i bite my fist hard to suppress myself from making any noise. People around us haven't noticed anything... I moan into my fist as your skilled fingers tease and stimulate my already engorged clit, slowly destroying my will to resist... I can feel the size of your cock as you grind it into my body, which weakens me even further. I wanna punch your face, but i feel like i'll fall from arousal if i let go of the pole.
* Fernandolickstit leans in against your head, taking your earlobe into my mouth and caressing it with my agile tongue, swirling it around as my hands continue their assault. Feeling like it's time to step it up, I part your swollen lips with two fingers and sink them inside of you, pumping them slowly down to the knuckle.
* Ms Marvelous my head jerks up and i cover my mouth as i let out a louder moan... my knuckle on the bar turns white as i clench onto it for a dear life. Your tongue is arousing my body like i never felt before... i can feel my love juice freely flowing down, leaving my silk panties saturated and soaking up my stockings. My aroma and pheromon saturates the air... Feeling weaker by seconds, my threats turn into plea "please stop... not here, in front of all these people..."
* Fernandolickstit whispers, "Ah, my dear, but that's exactly why I choose public transportation, because there's no where to run, and you're all too ashamed to ask for help." I move my feet around a bit, they make light squishing noises as I look down and notice that there's quite a sizeable puddle of your nectar pooling around our feet. "Besides, why would I possibly stop when your pussy is BEGGING me not to?"
* Ms Marvelous looks down and notice the puddle, which makes me blush even more in embarrassment... my hand that covered my mouth is now grabbing on to your wrist in my shirts trying to pry them off with whatever strength i have left. I'm still stronger than you even though i'm weakening, and i slowly start to pull your hand away from my aroused tits... "you'll never defeat me this way..."
* Fernandolickstit is frustrated that you're still able to summon that much strenght, but came fully prepared for you. "You're right, which is why I brought my friend..." I say as a thick tentacle with a life-like tongue attachment at the end slinks out from under my coat and under skirt and panties, homing in on your puckered anus and cranking its speed up to mach 1.
* Ms Marvelous feels the tentacle slithering up toward my vulnerable anus... i clench my butt chicks tight, hoping to ward it off...
* Fernandolickstit shifts a device in my hand, instructing the tentacle to probe, and it does so with great vigor. It plunges deep inside your anus with little difficulty, instantly latching itself on and beginning its "breaking" sequence, by cranking up the vibration to maximum.
* Ms Marvelous it takes all my strength and concetration not to scream as my tight virginal ass is penetrated by your thick tentacle... just about when i think it can't get worse, i feel the vibration, causing different kind of pleasure to rock my body... my hand on your wrist loses its grip, and your hand is back tormenting my breasts... my arm goes limp by my side...
* Fernandolickstit grins lewdly at you, "I knew you'd see it my way, my fair heroine. The fight should now be completely gone from you, leaving nothing but an animalistic desire to be raped in public like a cheap slut, a desire that I'm quite happy to fulfill," I say as I hear your muffled squeals and screams, fingering your pussy faster and tormenting your breasts harder.
* Ms Marvelous i can only think of your fingers pumping in and out of my soaking wet pussy... my mind is completely numb from the pleasure your tentacle is causing in my ass... my tits feel like they are about to explode under your fingers... my lips are parted and uncontrolled moan and gasps escape from my throat, causing people to turn and watch my destruction...
* Fernandolickstit grins widely at the crowd of people spectating, loving the attention, especially since it only means you'll get wetter, if only due to sheer humiliation. "This damn woman is insatiable, folks! I mean, she wants me to fuck her in the subway! You can watch if you want, she only gets off harder..."
* Ms Marvelous i turn my head toward the window trying to hide my face... i'm moaning and panting loud, unable to stop it. i'm holding tightly onto the pole with both my hands as i feel like i'll fall without its support... my pussy trembles and i can feel a huge orgasm coming...
* Fernandolickstit feigns scolding you, "Jody, quit acting like such a slut! You're in public, have some shame!" As I talk, my assault continues, another tentacle slithering under your panties, this one with a suction tip that attaches itself to your swollen clit, vibrating fiercly.
* Ms Marvelous screams as new pleasure shoots through my body... my hips grind against your finger with mind of its own and my eyes are slowly rolling back toward the back of my skull, unable to handle the pleasure... I scream like a little girl as my body succumbs, my pussy tightening around your fingers and pour out my juice with such a force, it soaks your pants... my body tightens up and shakes as orgasm destroys my will and completely drain my power...
* Fernandolickstit grins widely at the crowd of on-lookers, mostly men who wish they could be in my shoes, but in the distance I do spot a plain-clothes Solar Flare, who gives me an acknowledging nod as the disembarks, her hands emerging from under her own skirt. "Geez, folks, I think I'm going to have to fuck her. I mean, just look at how bad she wants it! I'm not moving my fingers anymore, yet she's backing herself into them!"
* Ms Marvelous whimpers and slides down the pole as my arms are not strong enough to even hold my own body... i weakly protest "no... no more..." but it falls on your deaf ears...
* Fernandolickstit feigns misinterpretation, "You hear that, folks? What an insatiable slut! Her juices are all over the floor of the car and she still wants more! Well, never deny a woman what she wants..." I call out as I lift your skirt up so the back of it is resting on your lower back, and peel the sopping wet panties off you, stowing them in my coat, "A little souvenier..."
* Ms Marvelous still breathing hard, trying to get my mind straight after the shock i experienced... i'm oblivious to what you are doing behind me...
* Fernandolickstit pulls out his engorged, throbbing member, easily 12 inches in length and slides it between your well-lubed crack, teasing your holes with its massive head as women in the crowd moan from the mere sight of it.
* Ms Marvelous gasps as i feel your hot man rod rubbing against my already abused holes... i look up at the crowd with pleading look in my eyes, but i can see their mind is already poisoned by my pheromones and the sight of young beautiful girl getting raped... I weakly turn my head and see you behind my shoulder "no... don't do this... that... that things not gonna fit in me..."
* Fernandolickstit looks down at you and smiles darkly, "You see, there's a motto that I live by and it is as follows 'if it doesn't fit, force it'," I say as I start pressing the massive head of my cock against your tiny anus, gaping it wide and hard as I try to make my way in.
* Ms Marvelous my head jerks back and i scream into the air as your monster cock forces its way into my tight anus... my weak fingers claw the floor as the paralyzing pain shoots through my body... the pain soon turns into pleasure as my anus is forced to take in more length...
* Fernandolickstit groans loudly as your anus clamps down tightly against my monster, almost crushing it. "Fuuuuck! This slut is tiiiight, people!" I groan as I manage to sink my head completely in. "Tell the spectators how you feel, babe."
* Ms Marvelous i pant hard trying to handle the pain/pleasure coursing through my body... i look back at you as you taunt me with such hate in my eyes, but only moans escape my lips...
* Fernandolickstit looks at your hateful stare, amused, yet a bit ired and slaps you forcefully across the face. "I gave you an order, slut!" I shout as I sink a few more inches inside of you, groaning loudly as I almost reach the halfway point.
* Ms Marvelous my eyes become unfocused as your cock penetrates deeper into my already abused ass. My teeth clench as i suffer through your cock.... "F... fuck... you..."
* Fernandolickstit is amused that even after all this you still have the strength to talk at all. "I believe it is I who is fucking you, dear," I say as I grip your flowing blond locks with one hand, as a makeshift rein and tuck my other hand underneath your body to tease your clit, working hard to slam my cock all the way inside you.
* Ms Marvelous screams as i'm forced to take in the whole length... my arms give up and i slump forward, my face falling into the puddle my pussy made... your hands quickly pull my hair, pulling my head off the puddle, and the juice falls from my cheek to the floor... i scream and scream as i feel another impending orgasm....
* Fernandolickstit slowly starts to pull his monster out of your ass, just as you find some relief, I ram it back in, balls-deep, with full force, wanting to hear you explode once more.
* Ms Marvelous my screaming quiets down and turns into little whimpering as you dominated my body... i refused to say it, but your cock buried in my ass feels sooooo good... i bite my lower lip as i'm punished by you for another five minutes...
* Fernandolickstit "You know, if you were a good girl and did as you were told, you could feel ten times better than you do now," I tease as I listen to the dulcet tones of your whimpers.
* Ms Marvelous tears roll down from my eyes as i'm humiliated and teased by you... my resistance is at the verge of breaking down, and my body is about to go through another mind numbing orgasm...
* Fernandolickstit finds even more perverted delight in your tears, wanting to completely break your defiance until nothing remains but an obedient slut. "Come now, you know you want it."
* Ms Marvelous triggered by your voice, my body gives in and i cum even harder than before... my muscles tighten around your cock, almost milking it as my pussy squirts out my juice like a fountain... my mouth opens wide as if i'm about to scream, but only gurgling sound escapes... my body remains stiff for a whole minute, then goes limp, falling on the filthy floor... my business clothes are soaked with my sweat and my cum...
* Fernandolickstit goes around to where your face is an kneels, masturbating furiously until my thick gobs of cum fly out, landing on your face and hair, leaving you drenched in it, especially since it had been a while since I relieved myself. "See what happens whe you're a good girl? You get good treatment... now eat it, you slut," I command as I groan, completely spent.
* Ms Marvelous my mind is completely blank after the massive orgasm... my body reacts on its own, licking off your thick cum with tongue... i even lick it off from the floor...
* Fernandolickstit marvels at just how broken down you are, admiring your limp, will-less body obeying any order that its given. It's like I fucked the humanity right out of you, and I love it.
* Ms Marvelous whatever remaining sense drifts off into darkness as i pass out from exhaustion, hundreds of eyes on my now defiled body...i have been defeated...

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By Ms Marvelous on Aug 19, 2010

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curiousl- yme41F
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hot hot hot
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All I can say is plz write one for me next... I think that you know enough about what makes me tick after our chat late last night. Mmmm, I am still all warm and tingly. Thanks for the memories baby! ;)

from curiouslyme41F, on 01:37pm, 08 Mar, 2011

Soul- Rose
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lol i love the fact she's original i mean a super babble hero just epic! i agree i want a movie lol

from Soul Rose, on 10:05am, 22 Aug, 2010

Fernando- lickstit
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I didn't think anyone but me saved the logs from a great roleplay session. You were awesome, babe, hope to defeat you again sometime soon... ;)

from Fernandolickstit, on 09:13am, 20 Aug, 2010

mnite83
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they need to make this into a movie...

from mnite83, on 05:01pm, 19 Aug, 2010

Vanillla- Rocket
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Wow

from Vanillla Rocket, on 02:52pm, 19 Aug, 2010

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